🚫 Stop Sending These 3 LinkedIn Outbound Messages

Want 3–5 replies today from your LinkedIn outreach?

Stop sending these 3 messages.

Prospects don’t hate DMs, they hate 90% of them looking the same.

[The System: 3R Framework]

Here are the three messages you need to kill immediately (and what to do instead):

❌ “Generic Pitch” → “Hey Alex, I help coaches get more clients. Want a call?”
✅ Replace with Relevant: Lead with a problem they’ve already posted about.

❌ “Life Story” → 7 sentences about you, 0 about them.
✅ Replace with Relatable: 1 line about their world, then bridge to how you can help.

❌ “Overloaded Offer” → Stuffing 4 services into 1 message.
✅ Replace with Result-driven: Offer 1 clear outcome (e.g., “book 3–5 calls a week”).

That’s the 3R Framework → Relevant. Relatable. Result-driven.

Here’s why this works:

• Relevant → Mentions a real pain point from their post.

• Relatable → Positions you alongside others in their shoes.

• Result-driven → Offers one specific outcome (3–5 calls/week).

Take one of your current outreach messages.

Rewrite it using the 3R Framework.

Send it to 5 prospects and see the difference.

Inside my private community, you’ll get the exact outbound scripts I use to book calls, plus breakdowns of why they work (20+ proven outbound scripts).

And once you’re inside, you can also book a free 1:1 with me to audit your LinkedIn strategy for long-term results.

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That’s all for today.

P.S. What’s one outbound DM you’ve sent that totally flopped? Reply to this email and I’ll send you a rewritten version using the 3R Framework.

Happy to help,

Alex